Ask HN: Review my startup.(soulfuse.com)
soulfuse.com
Ask HN: Review my startup.
http://www.soulfuse.com
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I agree with jhacks. I'm sure you will be successful with a few changes.
Good luck and good job asking for constructive criticism (...it's a smart idea people unfortunately often shy away from).
Good luck and good job asking for constructive criticism (...it's a smart idea people unfortunately often shy away from).
Update...
I changed the buttons to blue and added a blue line around the sign up section.
Any feedback for the link: "Online Dating and related topics & tips!" it launches the page http://www.soulfuse.com/OnlineDating.aspx.
It links to four other pages with online dating information.
Still working on either a video or the "what makes us different", to entice people to sign up.
As far as the design goes I am trying to keep the page looking clean and uncluttered, although I will look into trying to spruce it up without making the site look like it is trying too hard to get attention.
About the graphic, I have gotten the most compliments for the graphic for various reasons. My personal choice for using it was because I think it is more appealing to look at than a bunch of random individual's pictures plastered on the landing page. I think it provokes one's imagination.
Thank you!
Don
Any feedback for the link: "Online Dating and related topics & tips!" it launches the page http://www.soulfuse.com/OnlineDating.aspx.
It links to four other pages with online dating information.
Still working on either a video or the "what makes us different", to entice people to sign up.
As far as the design goes I am trying to keep the page looking clean and uncluttered, although I will look into trying to spruce it up without making the site look like it is trying too hard to get attention.
About the graphic, I have gotten the most compliments for the graphic for various reasons. My personal choice for using it was because I think it is more appealing to look at than a bunch of random individual's pictures plastered on the landing page. I think it provokes one's imagination.
Thank you!
Don
In regards to design, it's a bit old looking. The font (including the logo) is far too generic. The image is a bit clip-art-esque. The generic submit buttons aren't helping either. These are your calls to action... they need to pop!
Sorry to be harsh. But I think being honest is the most helpful thing.
Good luck!