Love the concept, but it's also a crowded space. I'm always on the lookout for good ideas in the space, so keep it up!
A few thoughts:
# Comparison
How are you different from other competitors, such as Cozi, FamilyWall, etc?
# Organization
Family life is busy, but the screenshots show only a few things. What happens when there's multiple events every day, with overlapping timelines for different individuals? Are different people assigned to different colors in the todo or calendar functions?
# Screenshots
The website lists 6 major features of the app, but have only 4 screenshots. What do the other screens look like? I've never thought of creating a FAQ for my family, so what does that look like? Is it just shared notes? (also, isn't "where did I put my wallet" a weird thing to put on a FAQ?
# TOS
Um, no: `When you use our website or its associated services to post, upload, share, or otherwise transmit content covered by intellectual property rights, you grant to us a non-exclusive, royalty-free, transferable, sub-licensable, worldwide licence to use, distribute, modify, run, copy, publicly display, translate, or otherwise create derivative works of your content in a manner that is consistent with your privacy preferences and our Privacy Policy.`
The privacy doesn't seem to directly address the above point, so I assume that you permit yourself to publicly post my family pictures and WiFi password?
# Header menu
Pricing is listed twice: Once as a page, once as an anchor link. The anchor link breaks if you're on the pricing page.
Interesting idea - I like the concept. A few comments:
- no demo? I see a 7 day free trial, but I’d like to see what it does before signing up.
- the headline “Get Better Grades Without Turning Into a Study-Obsessed Nerd” hits me wrong. It seems to be shaming students who study, but it’s a studying tool. Why insult your target market?
I don’t understand what it does that’s different. After reading the webpage, I see that it’s powerful and smart, but no detail on what that means. No demo pictures or video, or example diagrams.
So to protect my privacy, I should create a algorithmic representation of my face, allowing it to be identified in other people's pictures? And my phone/wearable should broadcast this via bluetooth to every camera in my proximity.
I'm sorry, but this sounds like a huge opportunity for exploitation.
A few thoughts:
# Comparison
How are you different from other competitors, such as Cozi, FamilyWall, etc?
# Organization
Family life is busy, but the screenshots show only a few things. What happens when there's multiple events every day, with overlapping timelines for different individuals? Are different people assigned to different colors in the todo or calendar functions?
# Screenshots
The website lists 6 major features of the app, but have only 4 screenshots. What do the other screens look like? I've never thought of creating a FAQ for my family, so what does that look like? Is it just shared notes? (also, isn't "where did I put my wallet" a weird thing to put on a FAQ?
# TOS
Um, no: `When you use our website or its associated services to post, upload, share, or otherwise transmit content covered by intellectual property rights, you grant to us a non-exclusive, royalty-free, transferable, sub-licensable, worldwide licence to use, distribute, modify, run, copy, publicly display, translate, or otherwise create derivative works of your content in a manner that is consistent with your privacy preferences and our Privacy Policy.`
The privacy doesn't seem to directly address the above point, so I assume that you permit yourself to publicly post my family pictures and WiFi password?
# Header menu
Pricing is listed twice: Once as a page, once as an anchor link. The anchor link breaks if you're on the pricing page.
Edit: formatting.