I would change the opening headline into a benefit to the immediate benefit for the reader. Something along the lines of:
"Share your vinyl collection with the world and discover theirs"
Then add a subtle pitch about Needle:
"If you love vinyl, you'll love Needle"
After that, I would offer the call to action. Your current call to action needs some attention.
You have 2 buttons next to each other that are the same size. Both are ghost buttons. Both are asking the reader to take two different paths.
What do you want the user to do most?
I'm assuming you want them to download the app from the App Store. Make that button the biggest. Make it a solid color that pops out from the background. I would test both an Orange button and a Green button to see which gets the most clicks.
I would add the "Available on the App Store" to your Download button to add that immediate sense of security that this is a real verified app backed by Apple. Even though it isn't, people get that impression and it helps to have it front and center with the action you want them to take.
I would change the "Watch the Video" button to a text link under the download button. That will be the indicator to let the visitor know that they can scroll down to see more. Add a downward arrow icon under it and you create a path to continue moving down for more information. Repeat that arrow throughout the page to create motion.
Back to the headline, I would remove the large logo and put your headline there. You have branding in the upper left corner. There's really no need to repeat it, especially in that most important real estate.
Regarding the content, it could use a proof-read. I don't mean any offense but it reads like English may not be your first language.
There are grammar issues here and there that could be cleaned up, for example:
"we got lot of ideas" should be "we have a lot of ideas" or "we've got a lot of ideas".
I would move the Record Labels and Advertise to separate landing pages devoted to those features. This landing page should be about downloading the app and becoming part of a worldwide vinyl loving community.
If I were a vinyl enthusiast, I wouldn't care about the record label part.
Though it isn't necessary, I would add in some imagery or icons to the content. It's pretty text heavy (even though the textual content is minimal).
For example, putting the "Share", "Dig", "Stream" content blocks next to each other with some nice related icons above the respective content would reader really well, catch people's attention and visually shorten that content section.
I like that you used some language that is familiar to vinyl lovers. "Dig through thousands of vinyl records..." captures a real emotion for vinyl enthusiasts. Now if you had a nice illustration that helped bring it home, it would work well.
Last thing I would do is tweak the black and white background with the record. It doesn't have enough contrast with the white text over it and you have to scroll up and down to read the content sometimes as the white text blends in with the white of the image.
Overall, it is a nice design. It has a hip feel to it in that it uses some current trends.
I would change the opening headline into a benefit to the immediate benefit for the reader. Something along the lines of:
"Share your vinyl collection with the world and discover theirs"
Then add a subtle pitch about Needle:
"If you love vinyl, you'll love Needle"
After that, I would offer the call to action. Your current call to action needs some attention.
You have 2 buttons next to each other that are the same size. Both are ghost buttons. Both are asking the reader to take two different paths.
What do you want the user to do most?
I'm assuming you want them to download the app from the App Store. Make that button the biggest. Make it a solid color that pops out from the background. I would test both an Orange button and a Green button to see which gets the most clicks.
I would add the "Available on the App Store" to your Download button to add that immediate sense of security that this is a real verified app backed by Apple. Even though it isn't, people get that impression and it helps to have it front and center with the action you want them to take.
I would change the "Watch the Video" button to a text link under the download button. That will be the indicator to let the visitor know that they can scroll down to see more. Add a downward arrow icon under it and you create a path to continue moving down for more information. Repeat that arrow throughout the page to create motion.
Back to the headline, I would remove the large logo and put your headline there. You have branding in the upper left corner. There's really no need to repeat it, especially in that most important real estate.
Regarding the content, it could use a proof-read. I don't mean any offense but it reads like English may not be your first language.
There are grammar issues here and there that could be cleaned up, for example:
"we got lot of ideas" should be "we have a lot of ideas" or "we've got a lot of ideas".
I would move the Record Labels and Advertise to separate landing pages devoted to those features. This landing page should be about downloading the app and becoming part of a worldwide vinyl loving community.
If I were a vinyl enthusiast, I wouldn't care about the record label part.
Though it isn't necessary, I would add in some imagery or icons to the content. It's pretty text heavy (even though the textual content is minimal).
For example, putting the "Share", "Dig", "Stream" content blocks next to each other with some nice related icons above the respective content would reader really well, catch people's attention and visually shorten that content section.
I like that you used some language that is familiar to vinyl lovers. "Dig through thousands of vinyl records..." captures a real emotion for vinyl enthusiasts. Now if you had a nice illustration that helped bring it home, it would work well.
Last thing I would do is tweak the black and white background with the record. It doesn't have enough contrast with the white text over it and you have to scroll up and down to read the content sometimes as the white text blends in with the white of the image.
Overall, it is a nice design. It has a hip feel to it in that it uses some current trends.
Good Luck with the app.