i'm really happy to see the translation getting around this far. it's an amazing text, & i'm glad my quick & dirty translation job got it out there mostly intact. i never really gave it a proper proofread, so thanks for catching those mistakes. more importantly, though, Phineas Fisher himself has just released his own translation. and, having just discovered that ghostbins are editable, i added a url to his version at the top of the text. here it is again: http://pastebin.com/raw/0SNSvyjJ