Review our launching soon page please.(lurnq.com)
lurnq.com
Review our launching soon page please.
http://lurnq.com/course/register/
LurnQs take on the entire MOOC phenomenon. What if courses went social?
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The page looks nice and you have a clear flow and call to action...but the copy could use tightening up all around. For example, the subhead:
> New, exciting way of doing online courses
Sounds like it's missing an article: "A new, exciting way of doing online courses"
And is "doing" the right word? Maybe the verb should be: "taking" or change the sentence structure from "of doing" to "to take"
There's a lot of little grammar and style things that should be polished...IMO it's a big factor in an online education's first impression
> New, exciting way of doing online courses
Sounds like it's missing an article: "A new, exciting way of doing online courses"
And is "doing" the right word? Maybe the verb should be: "taking" or change the sentence structure from "of doing" to "to take"
There's a lot of little grammar and style things that should be polished...IMO it's a big factor in an online education's first impression
Thanks a lot. We are based out of India and most of us can speak english but have terrible grammar. But I will get it corrected.
Apart from the name (is it pronounced "Lurnk"?) I think its a good job. You explain what it is you do in the header and then request an email address - can't ask for more in a premarketing site.
Good job dude.
Good job dude.
Thanks, Its pronounced - 'Learn'-'cue'.
Ah I see.
Though I understand why you've spelt it that way (I'm guessing its for the .com domain name?), it might be a bit of an oversight to have a education company misspelling the word 'learn'...
Though I understand why you've spelt it that way (I'm guessing its for the .com domain name?), it might be a bit of an oversight to have a education company misspelling the word 'learn'...
Too much orange text, makes my eye jump all over the screen looking for the important text.
Will choose a milder color. Thanks for the feedback.