Ask HN: Need feedback on my first own iPad app – Coloring book with some magic
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Can I offer some suggestions on the site copy? All meant constructively.
Draw with a finger It's the paintbrush we all have. Scary Colors lets your kid finger paint on screen. Just as fun, but far less messy.
Special Scary Edition Right now it's Halloween, so there are 30 spooky pictures to color in. More pictures will be available soon.
Share your kid's masterpeices Easily send their colored pictures via e-mail and share them on Facebook with family and friends.
We provide some magic All the fun of finger painting, but the color stays inside the lines, just try it. (You can also turn off the magic to test their skills.)
Draw with a finger It's the paintbrush we all have. Scary Colors lets your kid finger paint on screen. Just as fun, but far less messy.
Special Scary Edition Right now it's Halloween, so there are 30 spooky pictures to color in. More pictures will be available soon.
Share your kid's masterpeices Easily send their colored pictures via e-mail and share them on Facebook with family and friends.
We provide some magic All the fun of finger painting, but the color stays inside the lines, just try it. (You can also turn off the magic to test their skills.)
Quite nice, might need a few more options/tweaks.
For younger kids, you might want to have fewer colors, and make the color circles on the palette bigger. It would be nice if the interface rotated on page where you choose the photo. And a way to clear the photo completely, as opposed to having to paint it all in white. I looked for an undo button, but I think it was just reflexive... you probably don't need it. Something that looks like an eraser might be good for kids, as opposed to painting with white. And maybe a few more drawings with big blocks to color and less small nooks to fill (hard for kids).
Overall, great MVP.
For younger kids, you might want to have fewer colors, and make the color circles on the palette bigger. It would be nice if the interface rotated on page where you choose the photo. And a way to clear the photo completely, as opposed to having to paint it all in white. I looked for an undo button, but I think it was just reflexive... you probably don't need it. Something that looks like an eraser might be good for kids, as opposed to painting with white. And maybe a few more drawings with big blocks to color and less small nooks to fill (hard for kids).
Overall, great MVP.
Thanks, I'll think on adding eraser and possibly other tools in next updates.
Thanks for the test run. a few comments:
- while having the enforced borders certainly will enhance a child's ability... maybe have a toggle to disable it? drawing inside the lines is more of a skill development device for children.
- maybe explore ways to improve the drawing tool? penultimate's ink-like quality looks and feels great. maybe faster motions make a larger stroke than subtle movements?
best, mike
best, mike
Good idea, I rushed to release MVP, but I also think it will make sense to have different modes.
That's an awesome first attempt. Definitely amazed at the polish of it all. Would you mind letting me in on your secret on how you got it so polished? I'm a developer so I haven't a clue how to make it look as nice as you have.
P.S. Don't have my iPad with me but I'll let you know when I do get home.
P.S. Don't have my iPad with me but I'll let you know when I do get home.
I'd especially like to get feedback on some drawing magic: when you draw inside some area – you won't go out of borders.
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