Thanks a ton for taking the time.
We're working on something revolutionary in the learning space and if our wording makes us sound like just another cloud platform then we clearly need to go back to the messaging drawing board.
But does the actual problem that we're addressing on the landing page make sense to you?
Thank you very much for a very comprehensive review. I guess you're right, 'knowledge management tool' and 'collaboration tool' are pretty much overused. To your point on the target market- could you offer some additional insight after reading the following:
So our platform is more of a library where you could "shelf" the experiences and things of interest that are relevant to you and your group in one place where you can easily find them again later. The things that you could capture would include; pictures from trips, an interesting article, a chapter from a book, lists of movies, things to do, places to go, products you'd like to buy, presentations from events, audio files from events, research, etc. It's like your own customized local library.
This site is still on Beta. It will be launched before the end of this year and right now we are testing our landing page and the messaging.
We are also looking for early adopters who would like to test the beta version.
Feedback will be highly appreciated.
I find that leveraging the most popular which are Social Media and social bookmarking works best. Linkedin generates lots of traffic as well so be sure to create a company page in linkedin. Professionals thrive in Linkedin and it's a good platform for you to get introduced to your target market.
We are currently developing a Digital Collaboration Platform that incorporates both file sharing, data capture and social (www.phoenary.com) and we'll be using those sites for the soft launch next month including the sites you've listed.