Interesting idea. Horrible copy. I didn't get much past the first room, where my "eyes perked up" at seeing something shiny. A text adventure, among other things, has to be written well.
Every time someone posts to Facebook, it's a lie. All of Facebook is a lie. No ones posts all of the details of their lives, especially the ugly details, or the uncomfortable details, or the embarrassing ones. This student set out to underscore that fact, and I am tickled that she did so quite effectively.