Not sure "what you're quoting" but I wasn't aware we all needed a background story for someone to post something to try to gain exposure.
Your account was created 26 mins ago.
It's quite likely I'm sure this was the most eye catching thing you could find after creating your account and that this isn't someone coming here for personal reasons, much like I did to upvote.
Funny enough, you don't disclose YOUR obvious knowledge/relationship to the poster, thus the hypocrisy I think invalidates the merit of your statements.
No way you googled that fast to know what you know, so this is all rather childish don't you think?
Not that sneaky, and kinda shameful/petty if you ask me.
Anyways, yes, as far as constructive criticism goes, HTML would be a better delivery, and spellchecks are always good.
You may consider revising that ONE line a little, but I hardly see it qualifying as trashing. You're letting potential employers know your reasoning for why you'd leave a startup, which is something I think a potential employer would want to know, and opens it up for discussion.
Anyways, yes, as far as constructive criticism goes, HTML would be a better delivery, and spellchecks are always good. You may consider revising that ONE line a little, but I hardly see it qualifying as trashing. You're letting potential employers know your reasoning for why you'd leave a startup, which is something I think a potential employer would want to know, and opens it up for discussion.