Ask HN: Please help review this site: tippleBox.com
2 comments
From a strictly design point of you I'll give you my initial thoughts (mind you these are quick things from the top of my head after a quick glance at the site)...
1. Logo looks rought around the edges, probably a transparency issue with PS or whatever image editor you used, might want to correct that because it looks weird and unprofessional 2. Seems like a lot of whitespace in the main body of page, you could just truncate things into a smaller area rather then spread everything out that much and have all that open space that looks weird 3. Not sure about the choice of font or the typography in general 4. Too much use of gray, especially since it's the choice of font color, borders, and in the sidebar as well. Try mixing in another color and see what looks nice
Again these are just some quick things I noticed from a largely design point of view
1. Logo looks rought around the edges, probably a transparency issue with PS or whatever image editor you used, might want to correct that because it looks weird and unprofessional 2. Seems like a lot of whitespace in the main body of page, you could just truncate things into a smaller area rather then spread everything out that much and have all that open space that looks weird 3. Not sure about the choice of font or the typography in general 4. Too much use of gray, especially since it's the choice of font color, borders, and in the sidebar as well. Try mixing in another color and see what looks nice
Again these are just some quick things I noticed from a largely design point of view
First thought: nippleBox
Second thought: Sites like this need tons of marketing to gain traction. I hope they have investors with deep pockets
Third thought: design looks a bit weak
Good luck!
Second thought: Sites like this need tons of marketing to gain traction. I hope they have investors with deep pockets
Third thought: design looks a bit weak
Good luck!
Thanks