Feedback on landing page nevermiss.it(nevermiss.it)
nevermiss.it
Feedback on landing page nevermiss.it
http://www.nevermiss.it
2 comments
I like the idea, and the general construct looks good and the picture works well. But there are too many fonts in the text area [the white one is especially eye bleed worthy]. And the wording is a bit hard to get around. It should be really easy to read - i shouldnt have to put commas in and change the tense of a word for it to make sense... Also i feel the whole page is a bit dull, either the text box needs brightening up or the background image. Interesting service idea, i look forward to seeing where it goes!
Current copy on the page:
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NEVER MISS ANYTHINGS LIKE EVENTS/BIRTHDAY OF YOUR FRIENDS/UTILITY BILL DUE DATES /ETC
In our busy day to day activities we forgot so many things which will make us some time mad, like missing to wish close friend's birthday or forgot to pay your utility bills or no time to revisit your yearly goals you set...
We don't remember dates we Remember moments..
Our app is currently undergoing development. Sign up now to be notified of our launch!
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Suggested edits (Not saying it's perfect -- I'm not being paid for this and it's a lazy Saturday morning, not together enough to do real writing, like for my own websites, but I think I can do better than the above):
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Never Miss Anything Again, Like Events, Birthdays, or Paying Bills on Time.
In our busy day to day lives, it can be hard to keep up with everything, like a friend's or loved one's birthday, paying utility bills on time, and revisiting our list of long-term goals to make sure our lives are on track.
Never Miss It remembers dates for you so you never again will miss a Moment.
Our app is currently under development. Sign up now for ongoing updates!
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Best of luck with this.
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NEVER MISS ANYTHINGS LIKE EVENTS/BIRTHDAY OF YOUR FRIENDS/UTILITY BILL DUE DATES /ETC
In our busy day to day activities we forgot so many things which will make us some time mad, like missing to wish close friend's birthday or forgot to pay your utility bills or no time to revisit your yearly goals you set...
We don't remember dates we Remember moments..
Our app is currently undergoing development. Sign up now to be notified of our launch!
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Suggested edits (Not saying it's perfect -- I'm not being paid for this and it's a lazy Saturday morning, not together enough to do real writing, like for my own websites, but I think I can do better than the above):
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Never Miss Anything Again, Like Events, Birthdays, or Paying Bills on Time.
In our busy day to day lives, it can be hard to keep up with everything, like a friend's or loved one's birthday, paying utility bills on time, and revisiting our list of long-term goals to make sure our lives are on track.
Never Miss It remembers dates for you so you never again will miss a Moment.
Our app is currently under development. Sign up now for ongoing updates!
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Best of luck with this.