review my landing page(daily-social.com)2 points·by levicampbell·vor 15 Jahren·3 commentsdaily-social.comreview my landing pagehttp://www.daily-social.com3 commentsPost comment[–]leebossio·vor 15 JahrenreplyI like the background, but I'm with Kmarima. Should be just a couple of lines of copy.Should answer: who you are, what you do, and why you're better than everyone else in a sentence (or two at most)[–]aantthony·vor 15 JahrenreplyI get an alert in Safari on Mac: 'Floatbox does not support quirks mode. Page needs to have a valid doctype declaration.'[–]kmarima·vor 15 JahrenreplyToo verbose
Should answer: who you are, what you do, and why you're better than everyone else in a sentence (or two at most)