Show HN: More Kirk Less Spock. Messaging/sales copy course for tech sites(academy-three.teachable.com)

1 pointsby PaulMontrealvor 8 Jahren2 comments

academy-three.teachable.com

Show HN: More Kirk Less Spock. Messaging/sales copy course for tech sites

https://academy-three.teachable.com/p/websites-that-sell/

2 comments

Jefro118vor 8 Jahren

It's definitely satisfying a need. I think your site could really do with some social proof but if you don't have any yet it's OK.

I find the header, "More Kirk, less Spock", slightly off putting as a first attempt at selling to me. I don't watch star trek and have no idea what that means. I suppose your mileage may vary on that one depending on if the visitor knows the show but you are making a big assumption there.

Maybe try posting it on https://www.indiehackers.com as well, people are always asking for help improving their landing pages there.

PaulMontrealvor 8 Jahren

MVP, free course, helps you create messaging and sales copy for your website. Human element is almost always lacking in early consumer focused pitches/websites from tech co's. Would love some feedback. Worth polishing? Do the lessons make sense? What's missing?